Sunday, 21 February 2016 10:53 PM
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#22384 Here are some lyrics for a song I wrote (it's not done yet). Please give me your honest feed back. I am trying to better myself as a songwriter
Promise that you will sing about me
In my time of dying, left alone, by myself, on my own
I feel as though I've let you down, changed your face to bring a frown
But with every resolution comes a price, life after death or lack of a life
I know what I believe but it's not for me to say, it's not like I talk that much anyway
My point of view is obscured not by a bottle, smoke, or a gun at the end of a rope
They're just means to an end of where we all will be eventually
And we act casually acting like it doesn't exist, but it's in my forefront and I've lowered my fists
And I accept my fate as I know it will happen soon but I don't worry on my self being on the dark side of the moon
I worry about others and the ones that I love even the ones that have left me, flown away like a dove
I'm scared for them, I don't like when people cry, their lives will change forever and they'll always ask why
Because they think it was their fault, that they did something wrong, but nah don't worry about it, try to move on
As you sit by yourself with your head in your hands, try to remember me, try to remember me, try to remember me
As you sit by yourself thinking its all your fault, try to remember me, try to remember me, try to remember me
As you can't go through the day without breaking into tears, try to remember me, try to remember me, try to remember me
As you go to sleep, think about all the fun we've had, try to remember me, try to remember me, try to remember me
Some people have said that I am selfish because of my decisions
I understand their point but they have to reinvision. Put yourself in my shoes, would being called selfish better your dues?
I think not, and I find it kinda funny when people say that you can't be happy because of money
The things I want to do, my dream for my life, what was gone will never be and I realize that tonight.
I don't really care, it never bothered me, but it always made me sad when I felt constrained to even dream
Now I am here, soon to be in a glass jar, or maybe even ten feet far away from the light and I realize tonight that I am not a strong man and that I'm not in demand and the fact of the matter is that I don't even think I can anymore, shut the door, your letting in the light, And i am waiting for tonight, where everything will be gone and this song will be on the road to being nonexistent. not a must and to be covered in dust
I know what I'm saying is harsh as times but it's how I feel why else would I commit these crimes. In the end we all just wash away and the legacy of ourselves is all that remains
So I guess I won't remain, I guest I won't exist, I guess I'll never clear the smoke and see the light through the mist
Now won't you like to come and stop me from rocking my own dream boat, but your on the shore, sorry if seeing me drown is too much of a bore.
As you sit by yourself with your head in your hands, try to remember me, try to remember me, try to remember me
As you sit by yourself thinking its all your fault, try to remember me, try to remember me, try to remember me
As you can't go through the day without breaking into tears, try to remember me, try to remember me, try to remember me
As you go to sleep, think about all the fun we've had, try to remember me, try to remember me, try to remember me